Piss off a politican and you get audited. Piss off an artist and your corpse becomes performance art.

— tomc
Chapter 20, Page 9

Chapter 20, Page 9

Kasey gave me a wonderful full-page send-off for Lola, don’t you think?  Just as well-attended as Joey’s funeral, and much better drawn.

I notice that some readers have been complaining about how quickly this is progressing, and whether or not the characters could have done something differently.  (In the original script, Lola escaped…with Jacob.  That led to a larger war, with a brainwashed Jacob on the wrong side for a while.)

But the comic *is* ending, and this last chapter is almost half over.  I have to accelerate our story.  But stay tuned!  I promise you that there are still many more revelations, twists, and morbid bits of wisdom to come.  🙂

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Discussion (20)¬

  1. vonBoomslang says:

    *sniff* Just the way she wanted to go. Buried under a mountain of corpses.

  2. Mike says:

    Anything new in the works?

  3. Jordan says:

    Jacob’s legs are looking well considering he got shot with a machine gun.

    • Pat Scaramuzza says:

      Crap, the missing bandages are absolutely an art mistake. I’ll correct it and upload a new version as soon as I can. Thanks for pointing it out!

  4. Shaddar says:

    Missing the bandages he had when we saw him last too. I know your moving quickly, but a major Character like Lola eliminated in a single post? I get the feeling there’s something more to this page that we’ll see soon.

    • Chuk says:

      I kind of feel that way too. I don’t *see* her body…

      • fsjd says:

        If you dont have the body laying in front of you, with multiple bullet holes in the skull AND heart, then they aren’t dead. and depending on who it is, they may still not be dead.

  5. Unmaker says:

    “send-off” So she really is dead. Jacob now knows his memory was reset at least once and he is not likely to accept that again, so I don’t see how the unused script was going to corral him into a new memory wipe anyway.

  6. Ro'Wan says:

    Damn, she went down swinging
    Captain Mifune would be PROUD of you Lola

  7. David Cowie says:

    I see that I’m not the only one to think “Where’s the body?”

  8. Moxie Man says:

    “And the bullets are flyin’
    and the body count’s risin’…”

  9. Hidden commenter says:

    Well damn she got her tank moving enough to run over one guy

  10. Bob the frigate says:

    Lmfao am I the only person to read this page and not even question whether Lola were still alive? She obviously killed all these dudes and then went off somewhere to do whatever it is she wants to do. She’s not under that pile of bodies.

  11. -skimmer- says:

    And Im here thinking about how those guys at the bottom managed to get run over if her chair was already disabled…

  12. Pat Scaramuzza says:

    Today’s comic page will go up later in the afternoon. I’m getting married tomorrow, so things are a little hectic at the moment. 🙂 Thanks for your patience, everyone!