I’ve been working on my inking and line weights, and I’ve made some progress. I think this is the first page where you can really see the improvements.
Still working on proportions, though, particularly for females. Beautiful women will be appearing before long, and I need to get their figures down.
↓ Transcript
Roger: You be careful talking with Jacob, okay?
Girii: He's a pussycat. I'll be fine.
Roger: Well, I'm going to stay away from him for a bit. But I wanted to give you something.
Girii: What is it?
Roger: Oh, nothing special. It's not like a ring or anything. Just one of my backup cameras. This will record footage when I'm not around.
Girii: A camera? How do I turn it off?
Roger: It's light-activated. Cover it up and it shuts down. I don't know why I told you that. I really don't want you to turn it off. I guess...you know, what you said earlier? About trusting me? I don't hear that too often.
Girii: You need to give people a chance.
Roger: No way. If I give people a chance, they usually shoot at me. Or beat me. Or arrest me...
Girii: He's a pussycat. I'll be fine.
Roger: Well, I'm going to stay away from him for a bit. But I wanted to give you something.
Girii: What is it?
Roger: Oh, nothing special. It's not like a ring or anything. Just one of my backup cameras. This will record footage when I'm not around.
Girii: A camera? How do I turn it off?
Roger: It's light-activated. Cover it up and it shuts down. I don't know why I told you that. I really don't want you to turn it off. I guess...you know, what you said earlier? About trusting me? I don't hear that too often.
Girii: You need to give people a chance.
Roger: No way. If I give people a chance, they usually shoot at me. Or beat me. Or arrest me...
Just finished reading the comic up until now and I must say, great work! I love the atmosphere and the visual style of the comic! Keep up the good work, you got another fan hooked 😀
Thanks, Talos. Glad you’re enjoying it.